The Ascending Mage series has many subplots and characters. We use spreadsheets to outline and keep our descriptions consistent while keeping the overall story arc on target.
One of the aspects we track for each book is what we like to call the “Emotional Intensity” of each chapter. It’s subjective, but allows us to ensure we aren’t including too many low-key scenes in a row–or conversely, too many high-intensity scenes without an emotional break so our readers can catch their collective breaths. Essentially, the goal is to create an escalating saw-tooth pattern.
Below is a screenshot for the Emotional Intensity we’ve mapped for Ascending Mage 4: Nothing Broken. I’ve blurred the chapter descriptions to avoid spoilers.

Why We Track Emotional Intensity
Pacing is one of the hardest things to get right in a novel\u2014especially in a series like Ascending Mage, where each book juggles multiple storylines, character arcs, and escalating stakes. Early in our writing journey, we realized that “feeling” our way through pacing wasn’t reliable enough. We needed a system.
The Emotional Intensity chart is our solution. Each chapter gets a score based on the level of tension, conflict, emotional weight, and action it contains. A quiet conversation between Ember and a friend might score a 2 or 3. A life-or-death confrontation with a changeling? That’s an 8 or 9.
The saw-tooth pattern you see in the chart isn’t accidental. Readers need valleys between the peaks\u2014moments to process what just happened, connect with characters, and brace for what’s coming. Without those valleys, even the most intense scenes lose their impact. It’s the contrast that creates the thrill.
This technique has become one of our most valuable writing tools across all eight books in the series. If you’re a writer, we highly recommend experimenting with something similar\u2014it changed how we approach every chapter.
Ascending Mage 4: Nothing Broken is releasing on June 16th. Pre-ordering is available.
More from behind the scenes: updated book descriptions for all eight books, Chapter 1 of Ascending Mage 2, and our conversation about Ember’s character.
